Friday, June 13, 2008

avadto maj afat sagar

आवडतो मज अफ़ाट सागर

[लहानपणी पाठ्यपुस्तकात ही कविता आपल्याला होती.आजही ही कविता मला संपूर्ण आठवते. कवीचे नाव मला आठवत नाही पण फ़ार छान आहे ...तुम्हाला आवडली तर सांगा.]

आवडतो मज अफ़ाट सागर, अथांग पाणी निळे
निळ्या जांभळ्या जळात केशर सायंकाळी मिळे

फेस फुलांचे सफेत शिंपित, वाटेवरती सडे
हजार लाटा नाचत येती, गात किनाऱ्याकडे

मऊ मऊ रेतीत रे कधी मी, खेळ खेळतो किती
दंगल दर्यावार करणाऱ्या वाऱ्याच्या संगती

संथ सावळी दिसती जेंव्हा क्षितिजावर गलबते
देश दूरचे बघावयाला जावेसे वाटते

क्षितिजावर मी कधी पाहतो, मावळणारा रवी
नकळत माझे हात जुळोनी येती छातीवरी.

51 comments:

  1. I was searching for this poem since last two years on internet! & yeah it was my favourite poem too in school days.

    Its name is "Sagar" by Mr. Mangesh Padgaonkar.

    Thanks a lot for posting!

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    1. FYI Mangesh Padgaonkar hyachi hi poem naahi aahe. Kusumagrajan chi aahe. (Vikram.patil0201@gmail.com)

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    2. Right.. Kusumagrajanchi kavita ahe hi🙏

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  2. This is a very nice poem. I always liked it since the day i read it in my textbook

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  3. Yaaaaaaaaay Yaaaaaaaay - this was my favorite poem from Marathi textbook English medium - I just couldn't find it anywhere and I only remembered a few lines not the whole poem so I wanted it badly, thank you so much for posting this. You made my day!! I don't exactly remember how old I was when I first read this poem - but I think I was 11 - 13 years old. I'm very happy now.

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    1. Hello sir please hi kavita kiti salchya kontya pustkat hoti please sanga sir 🙏🏻🙏🏻🙏🏻🙏🏻

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  4. hey, thank you for the poem...my favourite poem too but could not remember all the lines...i remember the pic though...a small boy with his legs to his chest, back profile and staring at the sea at sunset!!
    thanks for reviving the lovely momories...

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  5. Yes this is very good poem.... I remember my golden school days.... Thanks dude....

    But sorry, U missed 4 lines of this poem. I m correcting that....

    आवडतो मज अफ़ाट सागर, अथांग पाणी निळे
    निळ्या जांभळ्या जळात केशर सायंकाळी मिळे

    फेस फुलांचे सफेत शिंपित, वाटेवरती सडे
    हजार लाटा नाचत येती, गात किनाऱ्याकडे

    मऊ मऊ रेतीत रे कधी मी, खेळ खेळतो किती
    दंगल दर्यावार करणाऱ्या वाऱ्याच्या संगती

    संथ सावळी दिसती जेंव्हा क्षितिजावर गलबते
    देश दूरचे बघावयाला जावेसे वाटते

    Tufan jevha bhandat yete sagarhi garjato
    Tya veli mi chatur panane dur jara rahato

    क्षितिजावर मी कधी पाहतो, मावळणारा रवी
    Dhaga dhagala futate jevha soneri palvi

    Prakashdata jato jevha jala khalchya ghari
    नकळत माझे हात जुळोनी येती छातीवरी.

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    1. darya varti rangit makamal uchlun ghete kuni
      Krishna savalya bhur bhur padti gaganyacha angani
      Duur tekhdi various...

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    2. darya varti rangit makamal uchlun ghete kuni
      Krishna savalya bhur bhur padti gaganyacha angani
      Duur tekhdi various...

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  6. Theres is a last stanza to it

    Door tekadi vari petati neele, tambade dive
    Saangtat te majala aata ghari jaayala have

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  8. The entire poem. Made some changes as per what I remember

    आवडतो मज अफ़ाट सागर, अथांग पाणी निळे
    निळ्या जांभळ्या जळात केशर सायंकाळी मिळे

    फेस फुलांचे सफेत शिंपित, वाटेवरती सडे
    हजार लाटा नाचत येती, गात किनाऱ्याकडे

    मऊ मऊ रेतीत रे कधी मी, खेळ खेळतो किती
    दंगल दर्यावार करणाऱ्या वाऱ्याच्या संगती

    ऊन सावळी विणते जेंव्हा क्षितिजावर गलबते
    देश दूरचे बघावयाला जावेसे वाटते

    तुफान केव्हा भांडत येतो, सागरही गरजतो,
    त्या वेळी मी चतुर पणाने दूर जरा राहतो.

    खडका वरुनी कधी पाहतो, मावळणारा रवी
    धागा धागा ला फुटते तेव्हा, सोनेरी पालवी

    प्रकाशदाता जातो जेव्हा जाला खालच्या घरी
    नकळत माझे हात जुळोनी येती छातीवरी.

    दूर टेकडी वारी पेटती निळे , तांबडे दिवे
    सांगतात ते मजला आता घरी जायला हवे

    कवी - कुसुमाग्रज

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  9. dhanyavaad mitra maitrininno... tumchya kade ajun kavita astil tar mala pathvun ya majya email var...
    apan ajun motha sangraha banavu kavitancha !

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  10. My favorite and the only Marathi poem I could remember after 22 years of school...thanks for the blog.

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  11. For last so many years, i was just repeating the first 2 lines, as i cud not recollect the rest.

    Like everyone of you this was one of favorite poem in school.

    Thanks for posting it.

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  12. Thanks so much for sharing this wonderful poem !
    There is one more such poem "talyakathi gaati laataa, laatanmadhye ubhe zaad... zadavar dhivarachi haale choch laal jaad.."

    If anyone remembers this full poem, pls. share.

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  13. My favourite poem, too. i think this poem was in Marathi 8th std text book, English medium. We had this poem for our orals. i was scared that i would have to recite it. luckily, i was able to memorise the poem and able to recite it. i couldn't remember the poet and could recollect only the first six lines.thanks for the post.

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  14. Thank you for taking me back to my school days. We all can recollect and put up lot of more poems.

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  15. Thanks a million for posting this poem. I still remember it was in the 9th std text book of marathi (eng med). the poem is so touching that even the initial two line makes me nostalgic where I and my father used to go on chowpatty and watch the boats on horizon.

    Alas !! That Chowpatty, Boats, Sandy Banks are all gone for ever

    The poem is of KUSUMAGRAJ (correct me if I am wrong)

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  16. Does anybody remember "jhuluk mi vahave" kavita?

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  17. DO YOU REMEMBER
    tap tap padti angavarti prajaktachi fule, bhir bhir bhir bhir tya talawar gaane amche jude. kuranavarti zada khali unha sawali vinate jadi, yeto wara paha bhara gavat khushi ne dule.gaane gaati tech shahane baaki saare khude.

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  18. the seventh line is like
    santh sawli diste jevha kshitija var galabate
    desh door che baghavayas javese waatate

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  19. Please find this poem
    "Dekh chitiyon ka julus maa
    nikla bahut vishal
    kya inke haathon mein bhi hai jalti hui mashal
    kaun kaun si mange inki
    kya hai inka naara.......

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  20. this was my favorite poem from Marathi textbook English medium - 7th std, I wanted this poem since quite a long time ! This poem is so NICE that I haven't find any better poem that I remembered till now, I only remembered a few lines not the whole poem so I wanted it badly, thank you so much for posting this. I'm very happy now.

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  21. Pallavitalyakathi gaati laataa, laatanmadhye ubhe zaad... zadavar dhivarachi haale choch laal jaad..shubhr chati pinge pot jasa chafa yava phuli,pankh janu thandi madhe bandi ghale aamasuli.....ase kahitari aahe.....mala khup aavadate hi kavita pan mala pan evadich aathavate

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    1. Even I do love this poem.. but tula jitki aathavte titkich mala pan :( .. pallavi v s.

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    2. Even I do love this poem.. but tula jitki aathavte titkich mala pan :( .. pallavi v s.

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    3. तळ्याकाठी गाती लाटा,
      लाटांमध्ये उभे झाड.
      झाडावर धीवराची,
      हाले चोच लाल जाड.

      शुभ्र छाती, पिंगे पोट,
      जसा चाफ़ा यावा फ़ुली.
      पंख जणू थंडीमध्ये,
      बंडी घाली आमसुली.

      जांभळाचे तुझे डोळे,
      तुझी बोटे जास्वंदीची.
      आणि छोटी अखेरची
      पिसे जवस फुलांची.

      गड्या पाखरा, तू असा
      सारा देखणा रे कसा?
      पाण्यावर उडताना,
      नको मारू मात्र मासा.

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  22. this was my favorite poem from Marathi textbook English medium. NOSTALGIC...

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  23. This is the Poem that brings me back my childhood I had this poem in school I guess about 15 years ago. very Beautiful poem with our old memories attached.
    Thanks for posting it.
    Sam

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  24. Thankyou all, it is my 'living my childhood' poem and a sincere thanks to all of you people for making the complete poem back on internet.sandeepvwasnik@gmail.com

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  25. This is the only poem i remember by heart even today. I am 37 today. And i remember i read it in 8th std. Its a beautiful poem - Venkat

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  26. आवडतो मज अफ़ाट सागर, अथांग पाणी निळे
    निळ्या जांभळ्या जळात केशर सायंकाळी मिळे

    फेस फुलांचे सफेत शिंपित, वाटेवरती सडे
    हजार लाटा नाचत येती, गात किनाऱ्याकडे

    मऊ मऊ रेतीत रे कधी मी, खेळ खेळतो किती
    दंगल दर्यावार करणाऱ्या वाऱ्याच्या संगती

    शुभ्र पांढरी दिसती जेंव्हा क्षितिजावर गलबते
    देश दूरचे बघावयाला जावेसे वाटते

    तुफान केव्हा भांडत येतो, सागरही गर्जतो,
    त्या वेळी मी चतुरपणाने दूर जरा राहतो.

    खडकावरुनी कधी पाहतो, मावळणारा रवी
    ढगा-ढगाला फुटते तेंव्हा, सोनेरी पालवी

    प्रकाशदाता जातो जेव्हा जळाखालच्या घरी
    नकळत माझे हात जुळोनी येती छातीवरी.

    दर्यावरची रंगित मखमल उचलुन घेते कुणी
    कृष्णसावल्या भुरभुर पडती गगनाच्या अंगणी

    दूर टेकडी वारी पेटती निळे , तांबडे दिवे
    सांगतात ते मजला आता घरी जायला हवे

    कवी - कुसुमाग्रज

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    1. Very Beautiful Poem. Remembering my childhood school days, my class, my teacher singing this poem.Thanks for sharing.

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  27. searchingthispoemformany years

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  28. after 35 years the poem impacts me in inexplicable ways. i remembered the last line only n looked 4 d poem. thank u so much 4 posting it.

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  29. Very very very nice poem really feeling awesome


    But I think its not 8 standard poem
    Thanks

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  30. Very very very nice poem really feeling awesome


    But I think its not 8 standard poem
    Thanks

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  31. Hey this is my one of the favourite poems. Becoz you I have the nostalgic memories of my magical childhood days. Thanks. --vijay chunkikar

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  32. Hey this is my one of the favourite poems. Becoz you I have the nostalgic memories of my magical childhood days. Thanks. --vijay chunkikar

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  33. Have been lkng for this poem since so long. One of my favourites of my childhood.Thanks a lot for posting.

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  34. Sunder kavita jila Vachun nakalat baalpanat mann ramte....

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  37. A big thank you to the person who posted it...i was searcbjng for tjis poem sinve years...but cojldnt find it..i only remebered the last 2 lines and the pic of an innocent boy sitting alone by tje sea wathing the sun go down..it was soo touching...i still get tears in my eyes thinking and imagining this poem...cant tha k enough to u..a d to all the people who love this poem..i can say we r similar some where in our heart...tc and god bless

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  38. I like this poem very much, this was in my course in class 7 .

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  39. My favourite since 7 std which is almost 40 years ago and knew it by heart except the lines about the galbate!!
    I always recite it every time I visit any seashore !!
    Thanks for reminding the lines about the galbate!!

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  40. माझी आवडती कविता! मला वाटलं होतं की हे माझं बालपणीचं कवितांचं विश्व कुठेतरी लुप्त झाल की काय? पण नाही; आज मला समजले की माझ्यासारखे असे अनेक कवीता रसिक आहेत. धन्यवाद!
    जर कुणाला वसंत बापटांची "घाटातली वाट, काय तीचा थाट, मुरकते गिरकते लवते पाठोपाठ"; ही कविता पुर्ण आठवत असेल तर कृपया पोस्ट करावी. धन्यवाद माझ्या मराठी विश्वातील मित्र-मैत्रिणींनो!

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